welcome to my limbo

3 poems on a “page” is quite a treat, really…

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

A work certainly not in progress but on-going and cleverly created! Need ask how easy or hard this wonder was to make, did the words slip off the quill or did you need think and think again to achieve what you wanted. Yes, I did come to a quick decision as to which! Fine words, laid with precision yet, when read aloud in three parts, are as fluid as runny honey. Clever, touching and quite beautiful.

[Red Brick Keshner]

“Slipping off the quill” was definitely the order of the day. The surprise was reading the lines together as one line, line by line still made sense and formed the third poem. And to live for days that drip freely as honey 🍯 is marvellous. Thanks kindly.
Freds

[emmajoygreen]

Not surprised; am still waiting for similar!

[Chris Shaw]

Yes, clever you. Three poems here for the reader, if they look close enough but I enjoyed most, all the words in one helping. That is because I am greedy and like detail and light. Beautiful poetry Freds of your limbo.

Chris

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks Chris. This was quite the enjoyable write ✍🏻 that even in the resulting page placement continued to elicit pleasure. So glad you liked it. There is a certain greediness about experiencing poetry that enhances its enjoyment. Cheers!
Freds

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful poem. Enjoyed how you presented.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks ATP