a vantaged perch

a vantaged perch

A Poem by Red Brick Keshner


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Paints quite a lovely picture, I love pigeons so I may be a little biased.
I think the formatting could use some work, but that's all.
One thing, the last two lines, for me, didn't flow as well as the rest, but that's a minor criticism.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Red Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Thanks Doug 🙏🏻 Your visit and thoughts are important and well appreciated.

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Red Brick Keshner
Red Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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Perhaps poetry is the only palpitation of my thoughts and experiences. It becomes a commentary, a puppet theatre on what is observable and discernible from the vast expanse of the human condition. Eac.. more..

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