a vantaged perch
A Poem by Red Brick Keshner
© 2023 Red Brick Keshner
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Paints quite a lovely picture, I love pigeons so I may be a little biased.
I think the formatting could use some work, but that's all.
One thing, the last two lines, for me, didn't flow as well as the rest, but that's a minor criticism.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Thanks Doug 🙏🏻 Your visit and thoughts are important and well appreciated.
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Added on November 18, 2023
Last Updated on November 18, 2023
Author
Red Brick KeshnerBrisbane, West Moreton, Australia
About
Perhaps poetry is the only palpitation of my thoughts and experiences. It becomes a commentary, a puppet theatre on what is observable and discernible from the vast expanse of the human condition. Eac.. more..
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