of thunder and fire

if we stretched out rumpled sheets
sunlight opalescent shades shape

there on an open square
each step without a care
a wan smile through thundrin’ pain
each flash unrolls a stumbling’ stain

moonlight polishes over every scrape
if we struck out in utter defeat

Author's Note

test post from another device as the laptop 💻 croaked

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Crumpled or rumpled sheets laid out in a square. Been there and done that. That’s the writing process for ya. Painful it can be. More so if you haven’t got a laptop Freds. Have a good weekend.

Chris

[Red Brick Keshner]

As good as will be managed, thanks.

[Neville]

gotcha .. loud n clear .. it works .. as this does for me .. enjoyed & then some .. test passed :)

[Red Brick Keshner]

Cheers N, thanks as always!