where might you be?

~ imPRESSions ~

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Really like the expression in stanza two. Reflections of the past. Maybe after time we can look back with kinder thoughts. Breakups are unpleasant. Perhaps with the passing of the years we forget some of the pain and remember more the good things. I enjoyed your chosen music Freds. Nice on both counts.

Chris

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks Chris, I have often found that our choice in what to remember greatly influences how it extends into the future and expand in our inner awareness. Glad the music worked. It's getting difficult to bring the writing and the score together but it must be good practice to do so.
Freds

[Dennis Wolf]

I'm assuming this is about how life passes on in cycles and how the individual deals with it all, be it old, young etc etc... But that's just one thought.

A nicely written piece.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks Dennis, that is definitely in the cards. Your kind words are much welcome. Cheers.

[Dennis Wolf]

Sure thing. 🙂

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such a good poem and now reviews?
shame.
I think kindness tends to mature at a much older age these days.
We have to live, learn and accept...
and then realize how we have been and what we need to be.
j.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Kindness and hardness both increase it would seem with the passing of time. There is a pragmatic must in your last statement there... the difference between how we have been and what we need to be is our next step each step. Thanks j.
f.