sea change

~ imPRESSions ~

Author's Note

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Hi there,
I have been away for quite some time and had a few minutes to get in...and read... yours being the first one.
I really enjoyed this short poem of yours.. Yes, life is a changing... there was a song that I used to sing way back when.. Yes, Life is a changing... can not remember who sang it..
Anyway, that is how I felt about your poem.. such a delight to read.
Hope to gt back to writing again... just crazy busy here...
Lisa, Still in Spain

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks for the read and and the considered response. Your visits are always much enjoyed and appreciated. Could this song be the one by Kodaline? Looking forward to your writing again. Frederick.

[Lisasview]

Not sure who the singer was... but it would be quite old... probably 60's... more like Bob Dylan or Cat Stevens...
Oh gosh...oh well.. Hope to write this afternoon..
Lisa

[willweb]

There is a sadness to this, if I read it correctly. A little pain to follow the day where dark clouds play and oceans run for cover. Nice one my friend.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks Will, and yes there is that ever slight tinge of pain but mostly it's a new day.

[Coyote Poetry]

"When the sea don't move no-more. When the kiss isn't missed. When we desire silence. Did the love die? or did we forget?" A poem for you dear Frederick and I loved this poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks ever so kindly dear Coyote! Such an elegant and profound poetic response.
Frederick.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Frederick.

[Ken e Bujold]

nice tight read here Fred. Got me thinking of old chinese master Li Bai, as well as modern work of HD Dolittle. I also found a little gem buried in the poem when I dug down. the first line of each stanza creates a subtext within the poem (not sure if intentional or not) that re-enforces the whole body. Impressive

ken

[Red Brick Keshner]

It was kind of a rolling out and rolling over is cycles both smaller and tighter and more undulated and in bigger circles and kerning points and thought spaces. It is more for the feel rather than the quite difficult task of design intentionality. But if we rearranged the lines according to their placements in each stanza and made whole thoughts (sentences) it would make enough meaning to show embedded thoughts and poems. Quite so Ken. Thanks most kindly.