Seasons bring us full circle, to the reaper yes but, then, back to spring and rebirth. All things are cycles, rhythms, seasons. All things work together to sustain life as we know it. Wonderful little poem, Frederick. My grandfather's name was Frederick. He was born in Liverpool but the family hailed from Pontypridd. Always been one of my favorite names.
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The cyclical pattern of the Seasons may be seen as cold and scientific but it could also be ‘felt�.. read moreThe cyclical pattern of the Seasons may be seen as cold and scientific but it could also be ‘felt’ as a natural rhythmic improv, a symphonic rondeau of sorts. Therein is beauty and possible beauty depending on the working together that you have so generously mentioned! My grandar’s name was also Frederick. And our daughter, when she was a wee thing, adored the Pontypines of the Night Garden. I can only hope to bring good to the name as it isn’t as known as it once was. Thanks kindly for your most appreciated conversations.
Seasons bring us full circle, to the reaper yes but, then, back to spring and rebirth. All things are cycles, rhythms, seasons. All things work together to sustain life as we know it. Wonderful little poem, Frederick. My grandfather's name was Frederick. He was born in Liverpool but the family hailed from Pontypridd. Always been one of my favorite names.
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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The cyclical pattern of the Seasons may be seen as cold and scientific but it could also be ‘felt�.. read moreThe cyclical pattern of the Seasons may be seen as cold and scientific but it could also be ‘felt’ as a natural rhythmic improv, a symphonic rondeau of sorts. Therein is beauty and possible beauty depending on the working together that you have so generously mentioned! My grandar’s name was also Frederick. And our daughter, when she was a wee thing, adored the Pontypines of the Night Garden. I can only hope to bring good to the name as it isn’t as known as it once was. Thanks kindly for your most appreciated conversations.
The elementals bring forth a peaceful sanctuary in this piece. Something we need.
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The idea of a peaceful sanctuary is a perfect concept and should the seasons help provide their own .. read moreThe idea of a peaceful sanctuary is a perfect concept and should the seasons help provide their own unique variation is even more perfect still! Thanks RPC. 🙏🏻✨
The one thing I miss about where I live now is the change of the seasons. Each has its own distinctive feel and like you have penned, personality. Here we have, almost summer, summer, just past summer and January which is as close to a winter as we will get. Enjoyed reading your poetic seasonal thoughts.
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That is true Will, the clear cut seasons does change and guide people in their being and daily lives.. read moreThat is true Will, the clear cut seasons does change and guide people in their being and daily lives. I try since my early formative years were spent in more or less mono-seasonal locales. Thanks kindly for your much appreciated words.
You did a amazing job with the words dear Frederick. You explained the seasons in six lines. I do believe each season had different meanings. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
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Thanks Coyote. It's a gladdening thing when the poem does what it can and it is well received on the.. read moreThanks Coyote. It's a gladdening thing when the poem does what it can and it is well received on the other end. Most obliged to you. Frederick.
My life is one poetic journey. If I am not reading or writing poetry, I simply live it. To me the experience of poetry should be such - to breathe it, create it, and receive it from poems and lives th.. more..