sunrising sunset

~ imPRESSions ~

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Frederick... we live in Fredericksburg, Virginia, by the Rappahannock River that runs through our City. The Weather is exceptionally kind in General. Of course, we have Snow Storms every few Winters, as well as Change of Seasons... which makes the Thrill of new Buds in Spring and Colorful Leaves in the Autumn. We have Virginia Beach in the South of Virginia... and a Naval Air Base in Norfolk, Virginia. My husband and I are retired and enjoy planting small Cherry trees and Berries. The Sunrise in our town is normally Gorgeous with shades of Yellow and Mango. Our Summers are full of Crepe Myrtle trees with blossoms of Lavender and Magenta Red. Your poetry flows like Ripples dancing in a Stream. Enjoy the Autumn as you listen to the Music of distant orchestrated and enchanted Songbirds. gently, Pat

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thank you Patricia. I thought I had responded to your much appreciated response (apparently not) and as the autumn 🍂 unfolds where I am currently at, the images that you have so kindly and generously shared shall accompany me.

[duff]

I could read this in a hammock dreaming off into another time. The chirping of birds and a cocktail. Lets go. Nice job Frederick.

[Red Brick Keshner]

That’s the way Duff!?I shall be scouting for my seasonal spot and take it all in an soar!

[jasper]

The imagery to me is one of a marvelous lifelong journey.

I love it. Which I could write like this.

Alvin

[Red Brick Keshner]

Hey Alvin, thanks 🙏🏻 I’m sure you ride your own wave or words that bring out your unique voice!

[BreadLizard]

Really like the flow here. I can almost hear you reciting it

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks kindly. Poems read aloud are the iMax of poetry!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the beautiful, comfort of being born and going off into the sunset...in the middle is life and all its heat that we have to survive...such a beautiful metaphor conceived here.
j.

[Red Brick Keshner]

There is a clarity there in your review j, that brings a logical symmetry to the cv of a life. Thanks kindly. /Freds.

[John the Baptist]

I note both sunrise and sunset get much better press than midday. After the brutal heat of this past summer, I am not surprised such a poem should present itself.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Midday has just gotta redeem itself John, it's just gotta!