it's your birthday, George

a prize-winning poem, believe it or not, on a birthday poem contest, but in truth just a bit of fun.

Reviews

[Soren]

I love the intertwining of the metaphor of Christmas, children, the passing of time, and the relationship. Yes we all need to have faith. This poem held more than what first met the eye.

[Red Brick Keshner]

It's so good to hear that Soren; about there being more than first meets the eye. That was an awesome bit of feedback there. Thanks kindly.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

always fun to use song titles together to create a theme.

well done...
I believe in "Father Christmas"---

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks J, it was a fun change of pace and am glad that enjoyment is shared by some.