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here are two versions, the first and the redacted immediately following. Which do you like better?

more wistful now than poignant
while whistling with the wind
dancing dapples of recollection and forgetfulness
serve only to stir whirling notions
blowing willowy wisps of patinaed pirouettes
intertwining and reverberating shimmer 
that no regret has any hope of obligating

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more wistful now than poignant
while with the wind whistles
dappled dances of recollection and forgetfulness
serve only to stir a whirl of notions
willowy wisps blow of patinaed pirouettes
intertwine and reverberate and shimmer 
that no regret has any hope of obligation

Author's Note

Please remember to indicate which version you prefer on the comment box. Thank you most kindly. Frederick.