Mother Nature

New edition of an older poem... may evolve, of course.

No 'Inner Peace Spiritualist Church' can find:

Existantionaly Upon this earth... and mind;

Mother Nature embraces and provides livings.

Thoughtfully/"smaointinn" in Gaelic sayings!

Everyone within this planet's own populous,

Such numbers as broadcast, are incredulous;

Counted in billions, perhaps we understand?

Gladly acknowledge you as our future strand!

Here and/or Hereafter, Spirits are existing,

If truth is recognised among us... we sing;

Both believed in and referred to in writing.

This song isn't private, we are all sharing!

Ewenart

© Ewen A Morrison 

(Smaointinn: reflecting/thought.)

Reviews

[M.E.Lyle]

This is a complex piece of work which I'm not sure I understand. Seems you are a person of deep thoughts.
I do know this, you don't mess with Mother Nature.
This is great, thought provoking stuff. I had to read it a gazillion times.

[Brad Dehler]

Free, fast and flowing poetry. Nice style -I really appreciate this. Well done. I really like the open technique, seems to occur naturally.

[Ewen A Morrison]

Thanks for sharing this semi-abstract poem, and I love the non-compliance of conventional grammar; that's something that I've been experimenting with as well... There are no set rules to writing/reading poetry; thanks again, and stay free and loose with your writing,

Ewen

[Red Brick Keshner]

What we refer to mother nature is so great that many are unable to look further and beyond it.