Abandoned Space

I lack motivation to write. Nowadays when I'm sorrow, I don't immediately write a poem about it. But recently, I've been listening to background music a lot, and this I wrote from insomnia.

Outer space
A fall of grace
Here till I waste
Abandoned Space

My ship broke on the other side of eternity
But the faintest signal
Replayed the broken remedy
Fate returning so simple

The abyss
Something I'll never miss
For in the void
Yourself you must avoid

In the silence there's whispers
The hum of space quivers
In time stars fall
To death, a slow crawl

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[Moraša Kouřil]

"For in the void, yourself you must avoid."
I like that one a lot:]