Death

Like a breath.

Instantly inhaled

and slowly exhaled

all in

one moment.

Author's Note

For the "Death Spreads His Wings" Contest.
Plus, it's good to be back. I'll have some more poetry up as soon as I can find a good moment to type some of it up.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

To the very heart of the matter, final breath taken in four perfect lines. Loved it and congrats on the bloody award. Keep em' coming

[Robin]

Zen in black

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a lifecycle of expand~constrict~ beautifully placed words to rock death in a subtle bed~

[Ruth]

Excellent! Good to read you hon :)
This is beautiful! All let go of as much as held onto..wow!
xx