Flurry Space

Flurry Space

A Poem by E.V. Black
"

I can never escape.

"

Even if I could

close my eyes,

I wouldn’t see in here.

Even if I would breathe,

I couldn’t breathe

in here.

Pushing and shoving

and trying to get out.

I’m so sick

as I’m stifled

in the heat

of pressing bodies.

 

[Chorus]

 

This

            dizzying

                                    maddening

sickening

                                   world.

                                    A

flurry                           space

            full      of

                                    sound.

            You    can

                        never escape.

                        You can

never                          see

            the      end

                        of me.

 

[End of Chorus]

 

I’m

            starting

                                    to

                        spiral

            slowly

downwards.

                        Down

            to

the

            earth,

                        I

            can’t

see                                          

where

            I

land.

            And reality hits me,

a hard throbbing of sound

            pounding in my ears.

            Drowns it out,

            drowns it

                        all

            all

           out…

 

[Chorus]

 

Losing

           myself,

            floating tears.

What’s

                        there

to

           fear?

            Passing by

           spinning

spinning

           spinning

            SPINNING

Pushing and shoving.

I’m just trying to see.

 

[Chorus]

 

Senses

                        S

                                    P

           I

                       N

           N

                                    I

                        N

                                    G

                        S

            P

                        I

                                    N

                        N

            I          

                        N

                                    G

            spinning

            so much.

 

A

            flurry

                        space

            I

can

                        never

            escape.

© 2011 E.V. Black


Author's Note

E.V. Black
Another piece of lyrics. I just wrote this to write it. I think it's pretty interesting. Also, I tried a different structure, though I'm not sure if it's effective. It looks pretty cool. :)
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