The Lady in White

i NEVER write poetry hehe but i was inspired by the pic :)

Back from wandering,

Lady in White

Back from uncertainty.

Too many memories

Weigh you down Lady in White

I eyed you through the darkness

In the sea where i nearly drowned

You were a pearl in the sand

Flawless, too deep to reach

You've washed away Lady in White

But maybe one day

When it is finally light again

You will drift back to me

Author's Note

LOL this is horrible I apologize.

Reviews

[Dani California]

This is far from horrible... it's quite good. Love the metaphor!

I eyed you through the darkness
In the sea where i nearly drowned

Those are great lines. The entire piece flowed well and I enjoyed it
all, though those two lines had a distinct pull to them...

Nice job! You should write poetry more often. Seriously. I'll have to come back and read your stories as well. A pleasure, thank you.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Actually it is quite beautiful. I love it.

[WaWa]

It isn't horrible.

[Loribeth215]

No, not at all.
That was lovely!!!! Make sure you post it... I don't think it's under the contest.
I don't know why those things are so glitchy.