Fender

write please read and enjoy

Oh, you narcoleptic stars

don't go blinking out on me again

two shovels dig out scars

dirt they scatter across the fens

with a howl that cracks the marshal's eyelid

razing beneath the arch

oh, you sleepy stars, look what you did

you left the sky alone to focus on your march

Offsprings of life, water fills the path you trudge

who are you or I who do not drink of these puddles to know?

Who are you or I to twinkle eternal, but lightning bugs?

The less there is the more there can be, if we but speak it so

leave with lighter steps that your future is one none may judge

and a place you may beckon others to follow, but you alone may go.

Reviews

[Audie G. Couch]

Outstanding work. You are very talented.
Keep it up.

[Kay/Hayden]

Love the word choices! Clever and unique!

[deadmansgirl]

Your very good at writing man !