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A Poem by Ripped Denim 💜

Crying in the dark,

confused shrieks, clutching at air.

Quicksand at my feet.

© 2014 Ripped Denim 💜


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Nice haiku! I have not written a haiku in ages! You did a very nice job here with this one! It is very powerful and is very good and descriptive for such a short kind of poetry. nice!

Mind reviewing some of my writing?

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 Added on January 4, 2014
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