Baby Will You?

Stain my neck with your kisses
and hold me while I fall
down down down
make my knees weak
my head light as a butterfly
taste me
touch me
bleed your love into my soul
and tape together
the broken shards of my heart
baby
will you?

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[MoriartyMesa]

You might want to make some breaks between lines. However the wording reminds me of something like SlipKnot, Janet Jackson, and Cole Porter. Something that can cover different blends of music but all have the common theme of loss.



Nice work.