my

hello my star, my wondrous light

did you pack your bags for your long flight

good morning my sun, shining so bright

i hope you are swimming in delight

good night my sea, my favorite tune

i wonder, do you think of me too

goodbye my heart, my strawberry moon

this time we won’t see each other soon

Reviews

[butterfly]

goodbye my heart, my strawberry moon
this time we won’t see each other soon

I loved this part. This is well written. Thanks for sharing.

[light and ashes]

Interesting write.
Especially your last rhyme.
Borders on depressive.

[J.P.]

Lovely, makes me think of how I feel without my family.

[carl]

A pleasant reverie with a somber down turn at the end, makes one slightly fearful the heart may not remember all the it was. Thanks for the post- carl

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful dance of words dear Evelynn. To leave a beautiful place is always difficult. But the memories and photos. Keep us hoping to visit again. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote