Bye My First

young and in love with love

we were testing the waters

dipping our feet in first

until we fell harder

we were young and naive 

to think this love could last

we tried to make it work

but the verdict came to pass

and as the story goes

our young love came to an end

two broken hearts were left

picking up pieces to mend

months have came and left us

our hearts are both fully healed

and now i’ll remember

the love story of my youth 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I remember my first love as if it were yesterday.
I have nothing but fond memories of her, and some what if's---

j.

[Chris Shaw]

Delightful memories. Young love can give us a warm glow when we look back later in life. A beautifully penned poem Evelynn.

Chris

[Pink Pastel]

Great well spoken love this. love is just like this I so get this in so many levels.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Loved every verse but the first one the most
It’s sad that other people tell us how to love or who to love and when
Who knows in the future you may meet again and rekindle
Lovely poem

[Evelynn]

thank you!!

[Weeping willow]

Beautifully spoken as love of youth is stored in the heart, where it lives forever frozen ;-]

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple, elegant and without confusion, a touching and more over, right piece, well done, good read.

[Evelynn]

thank you!!

[Coyote Poetry]

The first kiss, our first love. I remember her still. Beautiful Susie. I agree with your poem and I do believe we can find love again. Some people need a lifetime to find the person to make them know joy. Hello dear Evelynn and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. Be careful and be safe my friend.
Coyote

[Evelynn]

thank you so much! you be careful too :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Evelynn.

[Dysphoria]

This is really beautiful and well done. I feel like it really tells the story of a young and naive first love. I love that it shows the healing and how that first love remains as a memory or lesson. It was really well written :)

[Evelynn]

thank you so much! :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

That's beautiful. Its kinda difficult to understand how true love looks like but it's just in the little things that are being done, that simple act of concern. those midnight pecks. the beauty is just believing that someone is around to listen, to absorb, to hug, to kiss! Just Love.

[Evelynn]

thank you :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

First loves are usually lessons. Looking through the hurt to discover what they may be is the tough part. Wonderfully done.

[Evelynn]

thank you! :)