Blame

We were stuck in this endless cycle 
That was ripping us both apart 
My eyes were always filled with tears 
And you were breaking your own heart 
We would fight and come right back 
Like we were addicted to the pain 
But we would forget the hurt, the tears, the ache 
So we could go dancing in the rain 
But after a while you had enough 
You were done with me and the hurt 
I understood but it broke my heart 
It broke me when you left me in the dirt 
I still see you every time I turn around 
And I can’t help bit wish things were still the same 
But I knew it’s wrong for me to pray 
Because in the end. I am the one to blame 

Reviews

[R. S. Morris]

If it wasn't meant to be, it would never last. But loved the poem. The rhyming was excellent. The poem made the reader feel for you. It's what it's all about.

[Evelynn]

Thank you!

[Neville]

Delightful my dear Evelynn & true... dont it hurt tho.. dont it just.. N

[Chris Shaw]

You have accepted total blame here. I reckon it takes two to tango. Sadly some relationships don't work out and it can be a painful journey before you take separate pathways. Even then, the pain doesn't go. You live it as you journey alone. Sad poem.

Chris