Photographs

I'm looking through the photographs

Of the memories we used to have

When your arms would wrap around my waist

I'm flipping through the pages

Of the book of our different stages

And I can't help but wonder if I've been replaced

I'm replaying our love in the version of a movie

But the more I watch it, the more it turns gloomy

So I need to know, have those memories been erased

Reviews

[Inanna]

Wonderful writing keep it up

[Dysphoria]

This reminds me of the song "A picture of you".

You are an amazing writer and I hope you never stop writing these poems.

[Evelynn]

Thank you so much!!!

[AriesGirl]

SO MUCH EMOTION. Old photos can bring out so much heartache. I love how easy your writing is to relate to. Well done.

[Evelynn]

Thank you so much!!

[Gee]

They'll be a few women ( and men) who'll relate to this.
S**t happens , people change, want different things from life. Folk, I think, should live a little, get all out of their system before marrying. No good a woman marrying the first sausage, wielding fella that shows an interest in her. She needs to go and sample a few more, if need be more than a few.
Good morning

[Chris Shaw]

Sad reflections, uncomfortable feelings to think your past has been erased. More often than not these are the emotions that follow a breakup. You can't wipe out the past. You can try and forget it, but that rarely works. Poignant lines.

Chris

[Diane]

Wow. I would hate to think of myself or memories being erased. If I was a cryer I may shed a tear. Very well written. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

[Evelynn]

Thank you so much!

[Rye]

so heart tugging. love the rhyme scheme.

[Desert Knave]

I like the melancholy and reflective nature of this ... and the choice of rhyming pattern also. Nicely done. ~Jim

[Evelynn]

Thank you!

[Sunshine666]

Very well written!
The Love and sadness in this piece is something you can feel with every line.
Beautifully done :)

[Evelynn]

Thank you so much!