By Myself

Your hands holding hers

As you walk down the hall

The way you look at her

As if she was your all

I wish you'd look at me

Like there was nobody else

I wish you'd hold me tight

But I'm all by myself

Reviews

[Inanna]

Beautiful , keep on writing

[Dysphoria]

So simple and yet so sweet. The loneliness, bitterness, sorrow, wistfulness. You can sense it all within those short simple words.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Strange how we focus on the aparent happiness of others when we are alone and sad. Often they wear masks and we do not know what happens behind closed doors or in their hearts. He may look at hewr with such affection but she may not give a damn. You express this well.

[The Immortal Phoenix]

This poem is relly captures the heart and lets it go in ink. wonderful and sad at the same time

[Robert Trakofler]

The taste of, the want of or the reality of, which is better.... not sure but id say in there own way they are all a delicious brew! Not the stuff of teenagers, but the stuff of life... in so far as a teenager these feelings become somewhat heightened to awareness. Those feelings remain static unless actions are taken and then the inevitable dreaded result occurs dive for thrive? or aloof for spoof? that is the real question dear Horatio... Very nice sentiment and wording here

[Evelynn]

Thank you!

[Rambone Campos]

Can I translate the poem into Hangul also good job love the poem better then my own. But hiding behind a poem my cause more problem I have done that for years and it never help me trust me. Also I would like you to look at my peoms plz.

[Evelynn]

Of course you can translate my poem into Hangul. And thank you so much, and trust me I know that hiding behind poems cause more problems. And of course I will look at your poems.

[Rambone Campos]

This sorrY took me so long to answer just a busy high schooler

[RoseThorn]

This is such a powerful poem. It shows how much your feeling in such few words. I can also relate to this poem. Amazing job!

[Evelynn]

Thank you so much!

[Sunshine666]

Beautiful flow I enjoyed it :)

[Evelynn]

thank you!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

This says a great deal with few words. Simple poems offer wide interpretation. Some will feel the grass is greener, while others feel only a reminder of rejection. I think; this arose from deep feelings, therefore it brings out deep feelings in the reader. Some deep wells hold sparkling waters, while other wells hold only fire and pain.

[Evelynn]

Thank you.

[Ethan]

This is a good effort, but it falls into a myriad of cliches.

[Evelynn]

Well, I guess that my life is a cliche then