I'm Done

I'm Done

A Poem by Evelynn

It’s not any different
It’s the same as before
You’re still not sorry
And I can’t take it anymore
You say it was a bad day
And how you just blew
Well, it was right in my face
And guess what, I’ve had enough too
So you can take mean words and issues
And go walk out that door
I don’t have to take this and you know what
I’m done, I won’t take this anymore

© 2018 Evelynn


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Absolutely therapeutic Evelyn. Going through a tough time is never easy and when a person is being difficult it can really wreak havoc on your mind and health. So important that we shut doors to those who don't deserve to be inside anymore. Well said and firmly written. Love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much



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Wish I had that kind of strength... I somehow end up making a u turn. Strong write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
I tried my hand at writing a similar piece, didn't come out quite as planned. But yours is amazing, the flow and rhythm is perfect. Well done!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Honest and direct words. Comes a time. Can't take no more. Someone must go. Thank you Evelynn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome Evelynn.
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Kay
If this is something that happened in your life, high-fives for getting out of the relationship. It's a nice poem, straight to the point. It's something I wish everyone in an abusive relationship would say and walk away for the better life they deserve.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you!

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