I'm Done

It’s not any different

It’s the same as before

You’re still not sorry

And I can’t take it anymore

You say it was a bad day

And how you just blew

Well, it was right in my face

And guess what, I’ve had enough too

So you can take mean words and issues

And go walk out that door

I don’t have to take this and you know what

I’m done, I won’t take this anymore

Reviews

[θεά]

Absolutely therapeutic Evelyn. Going through a tough time is never easy and when a person is being difficult it can really wreak havoc on your mind and health. So important that we shut doors to those who don't deserve to be inside anymore. Well said and firmly written. Love it.

[Evelynn]

Thank you so much

[Najam Us Saher]

Powerful and straight to the point, your words clearly reflected rage.

[Evelynn]

Thank you!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Diane]

Bam! This was a thought strong written poem and I wish we can all do this when we feel the need too.

[Evelynn]

thank you :)

[emipoemi]

I quite enjoyed the "I Will Survive" and "Importune Me No More" vibes. Very strong and powerful. Line 6, 9, and 10 have a bit of musicality issues, and 9 and 10 seem to be unnecessarily repeating themselves. With regard to Line 6, a simple deletion of "guess what" would help the musicality, and what you can do with Lines 9 and 10 so the ending doesn't sound choppy and anticlimactic is:

"I don't have to-
I'm not going to–
I'm done!
I won't take this anymore!"

The poem as a whole is fantastic! Well done!

[Evelynn]

Thank you!

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[SweetWriter88]

Wow, the character is really strong. Walking out on someone you care about when you've had enough can be so hard to do. Nicely written.

[Evelynn]

Thank you very much

[sette]

this is a well written poem, it was able to focus on man's emotions when in pain

[Evelynn]

thank you.

[sette]

very much welcome

[Desiree O'Neal]

I like it, it shows great emotions and a stand.

[Evelynn]

Thank you.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A punch to those that have wronged you and to the feelings you wish to rage, well done, good read.

[Evelynn]

Thank you :)

[Donna]

Very nice! I could tell you meant every word! I like it! Good job!

[Evelynn]

Thank you!

[Ayvid N]

Having a bad day is no excuse for taking it out on another. Powerfully expressed.

[Evelynn]

Thank you!:)

[H L Rose]

I like how it is clean and clear. You didn’t need any fancy words you just made your point, and I feel like that reflects the sentiment of the poem itself.

I liked the line “and guess what, I’ve had enough too”, because it seems to be giving incite into the words of the aggressor without actually stating them.

I’m glad I got to read it!

[Evelynn]

Thank you so much!