One Day

One Day

A Poem by Evelynn

I know that you’re gone
But I can feel you near
I saw you leave
So why do I feel you here
Is it simply the memories
Or is it something more
Is it my dreams
Is it me wanting the before
It should have been me
You should have won
You should be here
And I should be gone
I don’t know what to do
Or how to act
I’m scared to fail
Or to retract
Why did you leave
Did you not care
Please, I love you
I need you with me here
Please just come back
What do I have to say
Please, I beg you
Even if it’s just for one day

© 2017 Evelynn


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Very interesting your play with words here. Amusing and powerful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Evelynn

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
love this one, I love the flow of it this makes my heart ache for you! I feel that cold empty space from a loss in the moment the act has ended and the "victor" is left standing and the loser leaves tail tucked only to realize they didn't actually want to be hmmm maybe i have been both of those guys......yep

Posted 5 Years Ago


Evelynn

5 Years Ago

Thank you! And honestly, same
DX Ahhh, my heart! I really love your poetry,it's packed with emotion and reality and just shdunoshjaiojdishdeeeeeaoiehua9hafeoeu. It's too good for this world!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Awwwww! Thank you! :)
Beautifully written. I feel a sense of loss of someone so dear to you. They were your life, a part of your heart and your soul. Very moving!

Posted 6 Years Ago


very real, sounds almost musical

Posted 6 Years Ago


Short lines depicts the uncertainty or something.Well rhymed!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you!!!
Rubick

6 Years Ago

You're welcome!
yes!!!!!!!!!!...absolutely love this piece of work.....this is so cutting and deep for me...totally captured me and i love it...a couple of the lines had me hanging for a moment they where so well written....awesome.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Evelynn

7 Years Ago

Awww, thank you
The yearning for love. One sided or not. We want more even if we break our heart. I liked the need and the want of the words. Thank you Evelynn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is me now. thanks for putting it to words. I can feel the longing for someone here. specially the last lines.
well penned

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hmmm. Interesting story being painted here. When someone you love leaves, the yearning to have them back is really strong. Nicely written.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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