Where I Belong

Where I Belong

A Poem by Evelynn

Towns blur together
Cities are all the same
You’re still on my mind
And I’m the one to blame
I should’ve never fell
I should’ve never thought
I should’ve never dreamed
Pain is all that it brought
I sit by the window
Waiting for a sign
That maybe I was wrong
To leave it all behind
But I know that it won’t come
Because how could it be wrong
If it makes you happy
Then away is where I belong

© 2017 Evelynn


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Honest and true words written dear friend.
"And I’m the one to blame
I should’ve never fell
I should’ve never thought
I should’ve never dreamed"
Regret is a heavy rock to carry. When we run away. We break two hearts. Thank you Evelynn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hmm...

I'm not sure if you meant all this literally, but regardless, this is what I've learned about people:

If something goes wrong, and you feel bad, you should apologize. Any person worth being around should also be willing to apologize, especially if it is their fault. If you try to apologize, and they don't care, then they you shouldn't be around then; they will do nothing more than make you miserable.

I learned this the hard way, so I know what I'm talking about. The poem was very good, I liked it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I recently realized that feeling depressed about walking away from someone, imagining what could have been, blaming yourself, all of that comes so easily, but the things we actually need to be doing like letting go, moving on, being happy again, seem so difficult. I just want to say that, even though going through it is going to be hard, remember there's a light at the end of the tunnel. I like your work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Evelynn

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much
great.
If it makes you happy
Then away is where I belong
my favorite line. very well penned the emotions were much felt
good work and keep bleeding ^^

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Em
This is such an amazing poem, the rhyming scheme is awesome.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Woefully unselfish

Great Read

Matthew

Posted 7 Years Ago



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