Spread My Wings

Spread My Wings

A Poem by Evelynn

I jumped through hoops
I smiled and lied
I never yelled
I never cried

I never thought 
I never quit
I never wanted
More that this

But, now that’s changed
I’ve seen the truth
I know now
It was you who stole my youth

I won’t stand here anymore
Like your personal puppet on a string
It’s time for me to spread my wings
Despite of everything

© 2017 Evelynn


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That was too deep and strong
May you would always remain the same way

Lovely read!

Posted 7 Years Ago


very rhythmic... sounds kind of song like.. 100pnts!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was a lovely piece, a reflection of self, a strong heart and mind. Letting go is one of the hardest things to do.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Simply wonderful Evelynn.
So many great lines. Very memorable

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow. Very nice expression of feelings

Posted 7 Years Ago


The heart and mind can only take so much before it says...that's enough and moves on.

Nice writing. :)



Posted 7 Years Ago


Wonderfully expressed,moving on in a better direction;-]

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Evelynn

7 Years Ago

Thank you!

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