Regret and Hope.

This is a more serious topic about scuicide. A young person committed this and she tells you how it feels.

My name is Lucy. I did something that wasn’t exactly right. I at first thought it was.

I was bullied in school a whole lot. They would push me down, punch me, and call me names. I never had delt with this sort of thing. I was fearful. I started to believe what they were saying.

They would say that I was useless, I was a mistake, I am stupid, I should die. My grades started to lower. My 90’s and 100’s went to 50’s and 60’s. I was suffering with this for a few years.

I was very alone for a while. I felt as if I was a bird as free as can be in the beginning. Then I was no longer a free bird, but a bird put into a cage.

So a few years later, I killed myself hopeing I could stop the bullies. In a way it did, but it stopped it from getting better.

I now look from above. I protect my family and friends but, I can’t help their tears.

Tomorrow I am getting a chance. A chance to be free again. A chance to undo what I did in a new life. Tomorrow. Tomorrow is my trial.

(To have a part 2 say in comments!)

Author's Note

Ignore my grammar problems and my spelling please. I just want to know if their is anything that could be better. Thanks!

Reviews

[sette]

i am looking forward to the part 2 of this because as of this time, it is hanging. But I could say it is a well written one