Chapter 1

Dear God,

 I know you can hear me. 

I know you see me crying down on this broken world.

 Its like ive been shot with a bullet, and im crumbling down like a rag doll thrown in the river. 

Maybe I need to get myself together, but I just cant without you, o lord. 

I feel like...

 I cant describe it.

 Tears are flowing

But I know you can see me

If your grace in an ocean

Then we are all sinking

Changes are waiting, right?

The questions I ask are trying to give me wrong answers.

They are trying to kill me

To knock me down

But with you ill glow

Ill stand

Ill fight

And ill make the changes.

                  Love,

                        Bella

Reviews

[Shane]

Good imagery here, Bella. Nicely done and very powerful

[Chris]

Prayers by any other name... softly echo.