The Beginning

The Beginning

A Chapter by EverEmma

All I wanted was to be trusted. I didn't mean for it to end like this. What did I do? 
Somehow when I woke up on January 5th I decided to.....
See that's the thing I don't know what I decided.
I woke up here, in Brookfield Mental Institution. 
I only know because of a small sign over the bed
I don't even know where Brookfield is.
By my side lay a small, blank book.
All I saw was "I woke up  on the 5th of January and decided to.."

What?
I don't know.
When?
I have no idea.
How?
Still clueless.


Every morning I wake to a bowl of oatmeal, a cup of peaches, and a glass of water.
I sit and think until I get suddenly sleepy.
Then I wake up to another meal of chicken soup, crackers, and juice.
I once again become lost in thought until the wooziness sets in.
And I once more, eat the meal of beef, bread, steamed carrots, and water.


I don't know my name.
Or my age.
Or even what I look like.
But I remember one thing:
An address
138 Whitman Drive

That is the only clue to my past...
And the only hope for my future.


© 2011 EverEmma


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Thats strong. Very strong. I want to read more.

Makes me wonder...what did this person do on the 5th of January?

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very strong start to the story. I like feel of confusion and not understanding where the person is. You gave enough information to make the reader want to know more. This is a very powerful start with many mysteries to unlock. Thank you for the excellent opening chapter.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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