That Evening

That summer evening, I danced in the rain

Simply happy, no fear of death or pain

 

Arms spread out as wide as the azure sky

Hair swirling like a hand waving goodbye

 

Without doubt that tomorrow’s sun will come
And that dreams are full of hidden wisdom

 

Raindrops as exquisite as sparkling jewels

Fell upon the ground filling small whirlpools

 

The stars were revealed as the clouds opened

That evening was pure, magical, destined

 

Reviews

[ForTheWorld]

beautiful, wonderful..it's a nice one, it's a wonderful poem of life and more likely a magical world..it's really nice!! I love it, really love it!!!

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

beautiful, very simple, though it made the rain fall up towards my eyes... simple lines with much underlining complexity.... reverse crying and healthy tears

[HoneyHoneyMomo]

wow you made the day sound so beautiful!!

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lovely imagery captured in the perfect day..dreamy quality ..well done

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lovely poem~

[Morgan]

what ife should feel like! a wonderful poem!

[Cynthia]

It's a beautiful poem!

[KAREN]

Brovo!!!! So good!

[Lia]

I love the rhythm and the dark twist of the poem. Keep it up! Great work.

[Linear]

And may such evenings last a lifetime, filled with the scent of the wet earth, the fragrance of a moist and magical night.

lovely poetry indeed