That Evening

That summer evening, I danced in the rain

Simply happy, no fear of death or pain

 

Arms spread out as wide as the azure sky

Hair swirling like a hand waving goodbye

 

Without doubt that tomorrow’s sun will come
And that dreams are full of hidden wisdom

 

Raindrops as exquisite as sparkling jewels

Fell upon the ground filling small whirlpools

 

The stars were revealed as the clouds opened

That evening was pure, magical, destined

 

Reviews

[Andrew Wright]

This poem reaches far past the lines and language in which it was written. You have utilized something beyond, and THAT, my friend, is poetry

[Daniel Gardner]

Very good short poem. Has a lot of imagery that helps it feel longer.

[Aekmy]

Really cute poem. It has the feel of a young child being free. I like it. Great job. (:

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. It felt like a celebration of a summer evening in your words. I like the ending. "That evening was pure, magical, destined"
A amazing poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Beautiful.
There's nothing left to say but excellent job on this.

[Im His Daughter]

beautiful.. great job on this one...

[Marianne]

Short and sweet. I enjoyed reading this. Good job.

[Dinesh Sairam]

A splendid short poem. I'm gonna give a 100 :)

But every time I read a poem that comes close to being full in prosodic order, I always wish it was so. And a poem as good as this, it'd be best if it's in perfect meter.

Keep writing :)

[Stephan E. Weller]

that was quite reminiscent of the way the florida storms were during the summer when I was younger. It took me back to simpler times when I was amazed by simple things. Thank you awesome poem one that really tickles the beauty of a rain ...

[Ruth]

Wow! What an evening!
This is gloriously written hon!
xx