I took a look at your reviews before writing my own, and I apologize for that, it's becoming a bad habit. I am partially going to agree with Scatterbrain, no this is not Uninteresting, it is indeed interesting but it is a bit generic.
I don't blame you for that. I blame popularity in the writing style. That being said I like how you livened it up a bit with the formats.
Now the writing and words themselves were excellent, like Poppy I enjoyed the imagery, I enjoyed the little path you took me on and I related to most of what you said....sorry I don't drink Coffee. You did an outstanding job with word use and flow. Be proud.
personally~ I disagree with the "uninteresting" evaluation below~ I find it very interesting and deeply moving in its subtle parameters~ there is no force here~ there is a very gentle unfolding of this tale drawn in sublime metaphors~ I see the creative movement as delicate as a woman's fingertips unfolding the corners of a smooth cotton napkin~ in gentle presentation there is epic power~ you have created that here~ a 100 from me~
Honestly... I think that the last stanza should have been a shade closer to spinich. (hehe) You have surely captures many images as the piece reads from top to bottom. Many of which are very unique and orginal analogies. I enjoyed the newness of the piece. For many people write about the loss of love. But you have given us the topic in an entirely fresh way.
in conclusion.. I will say this. May you find the turtle, that will lead you to the stone, that the key to the secret closet is hidden beneath. So that in turn you may find your prince behind the shoebox containing the ancient treasure map to a land that has yet to be writen. :)
If it is 2013, and you are reading this, what are you doing here? What am I doing here is probably the better question, though. Ah well, carry on.
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