Six Word Story

       

I tripped and fell over, dang.

Author's Note

This is for a contest, review if you wish. It's kind of stupid lol. :)

Reviews

[scatterbrain]

Oh, I think we can do much better than this! a rose blooming (right?) isn't a story but a natural occurrence. it tells us an action of a plant, one that tries more for emotion than interest. you have six words, you have got to leave the reader with some sort of impression. You give one word to an adjective, which already kills any flow a six word story might hold.
how about some of these:

The plant stood, rooted with curiosity.
or:
Larry laughed driving off the cliff.
or:
Caught for egging Mrs. Shueman's, grounded.

eh? a story, a passing of actions, not a spectacle among nature. if this weren't a six word story, then the sentence might pass. sorry for being a butt munch :( i hope i help somewhat :) gonna check out more of your stuff now

[MaddyHi]

Thats pretty funny!! Plus that story would go big!! (not really) it would be so amazing!!!!! (well, if people like short stories. nah, nevermind) It would be my favorite story in the history of history!!! (nahh. not really.)
Oh, well i like it anyway!

[Richard Adamson]

I like it.

[Sloan Chambers]

I did that todaY!

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LOL..I like short stories...

[SimplyDisastrous]

Lmao. I can just picture a country guy reading this. Good work, Em.

[Reza Farahmand]

it has a lot to say, but too short to call a story!!!

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

the characters, plot, and every scene depends on the individual reading, super personal and beautifully written

[SimplyDisastrous]

Hm. That's odd. What kind of contest? A six word contest? Never saw anything like this before, but that doesn't mean I don't like it. It's....different. But well said. Well done, Emma. (: