Vengeance

Darkness fades

Forever has no beauty

Endless 

Words written in blood

Drip down the stem of life

Glimmer in the moonlight

I fly

Into the unforgiving night

Silver beacons rain down on me

A wrinkle in time

Love has no price

Charming malice

Misty daylight

Unknown dreams

Vengeance 

Author's Note

Please be brutally honest but not disrespectful

Reviews

[Sarah J. Kelleher]

I rather enjoyed this one! I think I especially liked the first stanza. "Darkness fades, forever has no beauty, endless." It makes me wonder who this vengeance is pointed to, but also makes me think of Twilight... For the concept of immortality. I love how you used the line "A wrinkle in time" too; it's a book, so it made me smile. :) Nice job!

[Pandora]

i love this great work!

[Daniel Gardner]

This Is really good. A thought inspiring piece that very great!

[Jonathan De Elvira]

ur very talented writer Emma, I won't lie...
juz don't holding back...
this is good poem but could be achieve the masterpiece status...
It's dark yes, but u can add some of new elements to add the depth of this art...

[Viva]

It's obvious you are talented but very thoughtful as well. I enjoyed the concept.

[Sincerely, Sofia]

I love it! This is certainly a powerful piece of writing.

[Lilly]

Nice images here. Great poem

[Coyote Poetry]

You have create a powerful poem. From the first line the story became cold and hard. Each set of line making the final line a true statement. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Inci]

A short poem still it is deep and has a certain impact. 2nd stanza is good..

[Ashley.M.E]

great flow and imagination, well done.