Let it come

That rain, falling with the silence of snow on my doorstep.
Each piece of me dances outside of my head so that only my eyes may see.
Visions and sensations wisp around, so tangible in their remarkable descend from my mind.
Scattered pieces of heaven falling to the floor like that rain at my door.

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[alifeacoustic]

A beautiful and wondrous moment, captured perfectly for all that it is, a moment of clarity at the beauty and wonder that surrounds us all the time, but we dont always see.
Wonderfully captured in four lines, expertly executed.