In the rose cathedral of my mind..

In the rose cathedral of my mind..

A Story by Ève

‪Wistfulness is the state of my existence..constantly returning to the place I come from..always feeling like a soul floating on a star ceiling watching over my surroundings..blended in a distant place that doesn’t bend to the measure of time..in quiet detachment from the world true to my being..as realities shift condensing together at once..as if I already experienced reality in an incomprehensible, hypnotic stream away from my immediate present & all my five senses rendered surreal living in a constant dream..a concentrated flow to the center of my cerebrum..a view from the Rose window in the dark cathedral of my mind..where the tiny light particles in the sun beam passing through pulsate in my sight and the deep waves of silence echoing in the corners ring in my ear..where even darkness speaks dancing specs of iridescence..and colours weep intricate opaque gleams..concealed in an omnipotent and brimful beauty that passes never captured or understood..an unfathomed sacred language I can only feel..with fey farseeing  eyes and a tranquil faint smile..like a scenic sophist..where everything in a word has a world and weight as real as anything else I can overwhelmingly see & touch..and everything around me becomes one with my own soul..‬

© 2018 Ève


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Wow, the scene or memory you have shown here truly is serene and heavenly! It's not just the image but the way you have portrayed it that put a smile on my face. :)
"the deep waves of silence echoing in the corners ring in my ear..where even darkness speaks dancing specs of iridescence..and colours weep intricate opaque gleams"
I particularly liked this part of the piece. Such a beautiful view and sensation and your words radiate the serenity of that surreal view. :D

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Rye
Such wonderful imagery here, This is a really good write. awesome job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow, I could actually picture myself here. Feeling these exact same emotions and viewing the same images are you project with such ease and clarity. Exceptional Eve. Bravo.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is one of the best stream of consciousness style writes I have read. Dark and enveloping with so many details perfectly placed flowing like magma to the ocean. I adored this write, its dark resonance and internal reference where a perfect read. Great writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


the voice of a seeker ... words have a hard time enunciating such experiences ...well done! i imagine you are probably not satisfied with it tho ... am i right? ;)))))))))
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow, the scene or memory you have shown here truly is serene and heavenly! It's not just the image but the way you have portrayed it that put a smile on my face. :)
"the deep waves of silence echoing in the corners ring in my ear..where even darkness speaks dancing specs of iridescence..and colours weep intricate opaque gleams"
I particularly liked this part of the piece. Such a beautiful view and sensation and your words radiate the serenity of that surreal view. :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 26, 2018
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Tags: Rose, cathedral, spiritual, soul, universe, sophism

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