Cold Truth

just my opinion about life :D

The void lullaby
of my hollow heart...
sinks deeper
...into the abyss
of impenetrable obscurity,
as I kept on playing
the empty notes
and dead melodies
of my cryptic violin.
...
I became colder-
swept away
by furious snow storms.
...
Frozen tears
run down
my flawed cheeks.
...
I wept
as I played
the last note
of our
melancholy
we call

LIFE

Author's Note

If you have any comments just write down below. I could use some useful advice. :)

Reviews

[Prantik Ali]

Wow!!!
Simply brilliant :)
Keep up the good work!! :)

[Grey Evanescent]

thanks a lot! :)

[Crimson Apples]

This was piercing ;-;
Fudgesicles, I absolutely adored this, it was WonDeRfUL!
It wasn't just singular lines that stuck out to me, but the whole piece.
Now I feel inspired to draw something... in fact, I will.
You did a fabulous job!
So fabulous it should be a taboo.
Your writing is faboo.

[Grey Evanescent]

hehe thanks! :)