Mr. Death

About me

What's behind those smiles

that you always kept?

What's muffled by those laughs?

Those laughs that made you special.

What's kept in those words of assurance- “I'm just okay.”

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Is a girl...

whose looking for happiness.

A real one.

Not those fantasies that she created.

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Is a girl...

who just want everyone happy.

A girl who's broken.

Yes. I broke myself,

avoiding to give heartaches to people.

So please help me.

Help me fix myself.

Give me light.

Give me happiness.

Fix this aching heart of mine.

...because if no one helps me,

if no one gives me a third way,

I might just choose from either;

the first path where I might release my true self,

a girl you don't want to meet... OR KNOW.

OR

the second path where I'll seek help from...

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Mr. Death

Author's Note

Sorry it's not rhyming. This thing's more of an emotional wreck.

Reviews

[Lindsey H]

I greatly felt the emotion in which you were trying to convey. I can appreciate this poem very much.

[Grey Evanescent]

thanks a lot~! :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I can tell this has a lot of feeling within it, and I can relate to this. Sometimes we try so hard to hide how we truly feel so we do not hurt anyone around us or we are afraid of what people might think. However, in the long run it only hurts ourselves even deeper when we keep things inside, speaking with someone you can trust really does help release some pain and heartache, with whatever it may be. Remember that no one knows how you truly feel unless you speak up sometimes, it is hard, I know I struggle with it even now, but it does help us. If you want someone to talk to feel free to send a message, I would gladly listen.

[Grey Evanescent]

thanks a lot!
I'll keep that in mind.

I've really been having this problem for a long time and it's good to have someone listen to you. Thank you.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

^^ You're welcome!

Yes I totally understand, it is great to have someone just to listen to you, it is hard to keep things bottled up. You're very welcome!