I Am That Of A Wind Up Doll

This is about a litle girl who forgets about her most cherished doll

Wind me up,bring me down.
Watch me spin, make me fall.
A figurine, a marionette.
I am that of a wind up doll.

Twist my key, make me move.
I'm that play thing, on your wall.
I am yours, you decide.
I am that of a wind up doll.

Toss me aside, lose appeal.
Throw me down, watch me crawl.
You neglect me, you'll forget me.
I am that of a wind up doll.

You can't hurt me, I don't feel.
Free to dismiss me like a ball.
Only a replica of what is real.
I am that of a wind up doll.

Author's Note

This is just something I came up with a while back

Reviews

[The realest]

Yeah the image portrayed is very clear of the doll being fun for a moment then tossed aside. Sadly this is

reality for most romantic relationships people get bored move on, and alot people think that theres always

something better around the corner. Those are usally the people that end up waiting the longest very good read for me though.

Good choice of repetition brings emphasis to the message.

Good message and form.

You have good potential in writing, you should read other works to get you worked up in your inspiration.

You may visit my profile and check out the writings of my friends. There are many writers there who would also be very supportive when they see your work as well.