I must go alone

This is a very short poem I wrote it was meant to be about dying but then I made it about leaving a loved one or your childhood home.

 

 

Not going to stay here among this world for long...another life beckons me from beyond, beyond the walls of safety and comfort and out into the cruel bitter world.

That is where I must go to grow apart from you and your warmth...I must go out into this world to find a place called home.

Author's Note

I know its not lond and not that good but please be kind about your reviews

Reviews

The message works in so many different dimensions that you can write more from this insight.

It can be about a child being born, talking while inside the womb before being born. (look for the music - tears by Massive Attack to inspire)

It might also mean suicide for others, it all depends on what is stated

The need to be enlightened could also be used

The need to evolve, like a butterfly coming out of the cocoon.

Good form and good choice of words.

This is a good piece.

[Joseph - Michael]

It may be short, but it has so many meanings behind each of the lines. It showed that we all have to grow up and / or move on; One way or another. Reminded me of the few times that I had to move from one places to another places and, I don't mean moving, I meant the changing part of the life...

Anyway, it's all still good there, so no worries...