Opposites

It's really quite amazing
What nature has done
With all the opposites
Put into one

How things so different
Can so easily coexist
With tiny wings of orange
And blue seas with mist

Reviews

[Lucy]

With tiny wings of orange
And blue seas with mist

Amazing visuals! I think that's your strong point!

[Eli]

I really like it! It's simple and short, but that's all it really needs to be. In the second stanza, the line, "can so easily coexist," I think the 'so' doesn't need to be there. Others may disagree, but I that's just what I thought. Really good!

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

This is a very beautiful poem. The imagry you create is absolutely wonderful!!! Great poem!!!!

[~Lizzy♬]

I liked the last stanza the most. It put a really beautiful and extravagant image into my mind. :) Wonderfully written poem, again. You've got talent.

~Lizzard~

[☯]

This poem gave a really nice image in my mind.
"With tiny wings of orange,
And blue seas with mist"
Very nicely written :)

[raindroplove]

very welly put