The feelings caged in

The feelings caged in
They need to be free
Before they burst out of me
The things in my heart
This is not art
This is rage
Coming out on this page
You may read while I bleed
But this I say to warn any way
The reader will cry while I die
Inside there's no love there is only hate
You can nor debate just read the words
This is genuine you may not believe
This is serious I need an aleive
I'm tired of the headaches their killing me inside
This pain I'm unable to hide I just wish I woul die
Sometimes I have tried
It never works this pain always hurts
These are the feelings caged in

Reviews

[Paradoxical]

I love the emotion and heavy mood.. great write!

[A.E. Reed]

Good job and I like how much the emotions were expressed XD

[Olive Belikov]

I love this one. The emotion just runs off of it.

[Alexa Tasch]

very emotional if i might ay and well written. i think is flows very nicely

[Calypso]

Write is good for getting emotions out. Very good job.