Thoughts

A thoughtful piece..

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Liquid light flows smoothly
Along a steady, meandering stream 
And concealed within its luminous waters
My thoughts run covert and unseen 

It strays away from the traditional path 
Directed by the currents of the known 
As the untamed waters explore foreign land
Diverging, my river runs alone

Ideas dissolve within the stream
Amongst the questions unanswered still  
As they await to be fished from uncertain waters
Then from out the mind they spill  

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~Eva Rosehill

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

I am lost here with words . This marvelous piece is like a sign or symbols covertly created and left over fields of wheat by some unknown extra terrestrial being . Too advance for me to even describe or comprehend .

[Latifa]

really lovely i enjoyed deeply

[Eva Rosehill]

Thank you for the kind words.

[Uday Kanungo]

As much descriptive and thoughtful your poem is, the rhyming, I think deserves special mention(especially the last lines). Good way to represent unique thoughts and ideas as a stream running alone. Overall nice poem!

[Eva Rosehill]

Thank you, such a kind comment is much appreciated.