Music

Your voice is that of music.
Each muffled chuckle and whispered "love you" transcends into eighth notes, chaotically yet uniformly dancing within the constricting music lines.

I find myself to be a fool conducting while with you, organizing an undecipherable symphony of you.. for me.
However, amidst the melodious chimes and chorus of whole notes, there is a much needed rest. For even in music there is a moment. A moment to recognize the unique yet capturing sound of mere silence.

Somehow during this mute beauty, I seem to treasure it more than words.

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

I lopve it! it's muxical, yet poetic. Great write! :)

[deeps]

find myself to be a fool conducting while with you, organizing an undecipherable symphony of you.. for me.

I am not sure what undecipherable is. I really enjoyed yoru write.
I think it is very well written.

[alesuriko]

Very beautifully written. There are a few parts where the flow and rhythm felt off to be but this was a great piece. I loved the emphasis and vivid detail of the music. Well done.

[Hi]

Amazing! It was a beautifully written poem. I find it flawless, there's nothing I can find wrong with your poem, lol... Thank you for letting me read it.