Need to know

Need to know

A Story by Brenda

How do you feel about me?
What am I to you?
What do you feel when I look at you, when I sit next to you?
Do we feel the same?
I want to hear your thoughts.
I want to know your every emotion.
I seem calm on the outside but there's a hurricane inside me.
I imagine hundred little things that could be going on in your head but I know none of them are true.
I can't even imagine what you feel.
Please tell me everything.
I can't sit here and keep calm.
I have to know.
I need to know.

© 2019 Brenda


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I liked the poem. It is sad. We allow few people to see our real face. Sometime, we must ask some questions. Thank you Brenda for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is nice! Your simple grammar and punctuation make it both relatable and very clear to understand.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 7, 2019
Last Updated on November 7, 2019
Tags: Romance, confusion, thoughts

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