Haiku-Parents

Haiku-Parents

A Poem by VertoAtrum
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A haiku I kind of pulled out of nowhere. It's basically saying I resemble both my parents physically, but mentally I want to be like my dad as I grow up.

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I will be my dad


I will never be my mom



But I look like both

© 2014 VertoAtrum


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Reminds of me something Woody Allen once said.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sound like you've come to terms with who you are. And still recognise your links with both your parents.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, that's pretty amazing. I've always been fascinated with the ability to put so much emotion and feeling in to such short poems. I really enjoyed this, though it's very short. I continuously am enjoying your writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VertoAtrum

10 Years Ago

Thanks for much! ^^ I've been more interested in making Haiku's because they need to send a big mess.. read more

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Added on December 16, 2013
Last Updated on January 27, 2014

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My name is Matthias. I am 24 years old. I'm a Leo. Also an ENTP. My passions include writing, drawing, music, and psychology. I have been writing since I was very young. Sci-fi, fantasy, and horro.. more..

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