My Grasp On A Puppet's String

My Grasp On A Puppet's String

A Poem by VertoAtrum
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I honestly am having trouble remembering who I wrote this about, but I still love it for some reason.

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You've kissed me before,

So common, kiss me again,

I flare up your inner w***e,

But really, you don’t mind,

It’s to make him jealous, that’s it, 

And he knows I’m no competition,

Even if, for you, I was actually fit,

I doubt it would go far,

But having your hips try to impress,

And your eyes trying to allure,

I won’t lie and say it wasn't a success,

You’ll always be my little toy

 

© 2013 VertoAtrum


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Interesting that, at least the way I read it, that there is a twist there. It sounds from the start as if you are the one being used by the other person to make another guy jealous .. but at the end it is you who is doing the playing and using all along. If so, that's clever !! :D

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Interesting that, at least the way I read it, that there is a twist there. It sounds from the start as if you are the one being used by the other person to make another guy jealous .. but at the end it is you who is doing the playing and using all along. If so, that's clever !! :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this.. Gave me chills a bit, but a nice piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 16, 2013
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Tags: jealousy, anger, passion, romance, cheating, liar, plaything

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My name is Matthias. I am 24 years old. I'm a Leo. Also an ENTP. My passions include writing, drawing, music, and psychology. I have been writing since I was very young. Sci-fi, fantasy, and horro.. more..

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