Yes, I love

Yes I love, but if you tear
I'll live for good, I swear
You swear?
I think you dare

Your pompous self reveals only now
I see how
Mr Giver love to help the low
Ah, I see how

Your friendship currency flow
To grace the feeble hand so
Now you swear
No, no my dear

Friendship's more, I fear
And again I beg no care
Never think you favour my fare
For we both count, we are a pair

Your stay gladens me, likewise mine
Needs no shoulder raised, better sign
Cos man even how fine
Be a stead to cover fine
So, no more, no swears

Reviews

[Lale]

I like the fighter in you; however, at some point, you've got to let go if there is no feedback. You deserve someone to fight back for you. Yes, I love your poem. You're good.

[Ethel]

Thanks for reading through. I really appreciate your comment.

[Ethel]

Please, I need your honest reviews.