Weapons

Weapons

A Poem by Robert delfuego or Ethan
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another random word generator master piece

"
weapons
used to kill
and spill
the blood
of our brothers
and others
all that meant something to someone
gone with human life
mortal strife always provoking
the most important right
that is to freedom not to have life
but to be free is to live
so i guess some what there one in the same
But what would you chose
a dead patriot
or a living slave
whats more important
the these 2 things
and with these powers
what consequences do they bring

© 2012 Robert delfuego or Ethan


Author's Note

Robert delfuego or Ethan
Answer the question i would rather be a dead patriot and with thse responsibilities comes power that is easily tainted

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I write these in the middle of the night on a i pod cut me some slack on typos lol thx for the review

Posted 12 Years Ago


"there one in the same" should be "they're" ? and "what's more important than these two things" ?
Outstanding poem:) Themes and ideas come through verry strongly.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Robert delfuego or Ethan
Robert delfuego or Ethan

Indianapolis , IN



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Hey my name is Ethan I'm thirteen an the funny thing about my life is its one of those unheard and unknown tragedies . My life is better now than it used to be but has inspired a lot of dark poetry an.. more..

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